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An epic fantasy set on planet Telluris, Innocence follows eight main characters as a sudden crisis strikes the world: an ancient sorcerer, thought dead or imprisoned, has resurfaced, and is now plotting not only to conquer Telluris, but to resurrect his dark god.
What to expect:
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Master Plot: Overcoming the Monster
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Elves, dwarves, and dragons
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Plot-driven narrative
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Slow build to cosmic stakes
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Multiple POVs
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Action and adventure
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Hard magic systems
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Clean storytelling - no language or spice
Chapter One: Daran
The first day
The soft golden glow of twilight was just barely visible as Vesper, warlord of Thelek, leaned against his balcony railing in melancholy silence with a letter clenched in his gloved right fist. Few people on Telluris would have recognized the beautiful, flowing calligraphy as having been written with a ballpoint pen, but Vesper was one of those.
A city sprawled out beneath him, surrounding his towering castle. Beyond the city's borders was farmland surrounding its seven villages, and beyond that was verdant meadow. Behind him, protecting the city on two sides, were the steep cliffs of the Stormshield Mountains. He still wasn’t sure why he’d named them that, other than it sounded really cool.
Vesper sighed. Simply looking down at the letter was painful, since he couldn’t even lay eyes on the words - written in a hand more elegant than some princesses he knew - without picturing the one who had written them. But the words themselves cut far deeper.
She always was an eloquent one, Vesper thought. Always knows what to say. Now that was a skill he envied. He only wished that he wasn’t the target of such sharp words this time.
Vesper carefully folded up the letter and tucked it into the pocket of his long coat. He still wore one of those, and probably always would. Maybe it wasn’t exactly fashionable around here, but he’d never cared about fitting in. He liked the feel of the material flapping around his ankles, liked the way it flared behind him when the wind struck it. And he loved the way that it made him feel… like himself.
Vesper scratched his whiskered cheek, feeling the rough scar tissue beneath his beard. Once, he’d been ashamed of that scar. Now he wore it with pride. Even though most people couldn’t see it now that he had facial hair.
Footsteps warned Vesper of someone approaching him from behind. His old instincts itched to reach for a weapon, but he resisted long enough to listen. The sound of leather boots didn’t tell him much, but it was accompanied by the rustling of a longcoat. That would be Uka, who shared his father's love of cool coats, though he preferred white over Vesper's typical black.
Uka joined Vesper at the rail. The younger man hadn’t inherited Vesper's height, but he had inherited his face. Uka had Vesper's same sharp nose and hard jaw, and the same fire in his eyes. But so much about him reminded Vesper of his mother: the brown hair, the shape of his eyes, and his smile. He didn’t show that all the time, but when he did, that fire in his eyes cooled into a soft warmth. That reminded Vesper of his own father, though the color of his eyes gave it a slightly different feel. Uka didn’t have his father's pale grey eyes, nor his mother's bright blue eyes. His were a deep slate-grey, dark blue on the outside with a starburst of silver around the pupil.
Uka didn’t speak, but his presence helped. After several long minutes, Vesper said, "I just got a letter from Adria."
"Oh," Uka said flatly, not looking at Vesper. He held in his emotion, as always, but Vesper saw his jaw clench. He wasn’t angry, as the gesture might have suggested; he missed the girl as much as Vesper did - probably more - but was trying not to show it.
Vesper still couldn’t believe she’d left. Ankë had taken it in stride… but then, Ankë took everything in stride. For others, it was proving more difficult to deal with, even after… had it already been a year?
"Never mind," Vesper said after a moment. "What’s up?"
"I can feel something on the wind," Uka said in an ominous whisper. "The veil is parting. The end is nigh."
Vesper cocked an eyebrow, and Uka shot him a mischievous grin - his normal smiles usually didn’t show teeth. This one, however, plainly said, ‘Bet you weren’t expecting that answer.’
Vesper rolled his eyes, and Uka cackled before saying, "Literally nothing. I’m dying of boredom. Ankë’s not even around for me to annoy, so I figured I’d come and bug you."
"How’s your flight coming along?" Vesper asked.
"Terrible," Uka said bitterly. "I can get off of the ground, but once I’m in the air, well… wind never has been my strong suit. I have no idea how Tori does it."
"She was fortunate enough to get the right patron." Vesper never said the word 'luck'. Irish superstition. "Makes a big difference."
"Wind's really hard, though."
Vesper held up a hand and began to Manipulate the air. As his powers came to life, every shade of blue in his vicinity sharpened and became more real. Wind swirled around his arm, forming into a miniature cyclone that raged on his palm. "What you’re asking the air to do for you comes very close to breaking natural law, kid. Our powers just don’t work that way. Wind isn’t supposed to change direction just because you tell it to."
Uka held up his own hand, cupping a fireball. The chromatic effects of his powers overlapped with Vesper's, causing the blues around them to become even more vivid. "Fire isn’t supposed to just appear when you tell it to, either."
"No," Vesper agreed. "No, it is not."
Uka dismissed his fire, Transforming it into smoke. He was recently Awakened, and had only had his powers for about a year, but he was learning quickly. It helped that his teacher had the same power set; Vesper had learned from a Shadowborne.
Uka had potential, though. Someday, Vesper hoped to see him reach that potential.
Vesper continued to bend the wind for a moment, then slowly allowed it to calm until he held only a gentle breeze. He released that and let it fade away into the perpetually autumnal air, and blue became its boring normal shades again. "We could always spar again."
"What, so you can slaughter me again?" Uka asked. He was grinning, though. Uka had never feared losing; Vesper had heard him say that one learned just as much from defeat as from victory more than once. Which was good, because he usually lost to Ankë, too.
"I’m forty-nine, kid," Vesper said. "You should be embarrassed that you can’t beat me."
"You don’t fight fair," Uka objected.
"Fighting fair is for losers,” Vesper said lightly.
"Hey!" Uka said.
"What?" Vesper eyed him. "I 'slaughtered' you, didn’t I? You lost. Ergo, you’re a loser."
Uka gave him a mock glare, but his retort was cut off by the arrival of Nathan, one of the city’s soldiers. The man was around Uka's age, maybe a year or two older. He looked half-elven, with pale skin and elongated ears. His blond hair was unruly, his eyes pale green, and his grin omnipresent. He managed to wear his black and silver uniform, with a patch bearing Vesper's mark on his shoulder, with a certain air of… well, weirdness.
"Hey, boss?" Nate said as he approached. He had a distinct South Mornian Isles accent. "We’ve got a something."
"A something, huh?" Vesper asked. "Is that something a problem?"
"Not sure," Nate replied. "Are weirdo elves with mysterious messages problematic?"
Vesper frowned. "Depends on the weirdo elf and the mysterious message. Where’s he at?"
"Interior drawbridge. Gotta say, though, if his choice of clothing is any indication, I’m betting he's not here to invite you to a tea party."
Vesper cocked an eyebrow, and Nate shrugged. No wonder he and Uka got along so well, despite his only having been there for a few months. The two were remarkably similar sometimes.
Vesper stepped onto the balcony railing and jumped, quickpulsing almost immediately. The technique slowed his fall by nullifying gravity's pull on himself, and allowed him to easily propel himself with jets of fire toward the bridge Nate had indicated.
Uka wasn’t far behind, using magnetism to latch onto one of the castle's steel walls and pull himself towards it. It wasn’t flying, exactly, so much it was falling in the wrong direction, but it did the trick.
Vesper closed his eyes and felt the wind on his face, felt his coat and shoulder-length hair flap wildly as he flew. Yeah, he could see what Tori and Luna loved about this. There was something liberating about flight. That said, it was difficult, and probably would be a lot easier if he had a wind affinity.
Vesper opened his eyes and floated down into the courtyard, deciding to walk the rest of the way so this messenger didn’t see him flying. His powers were extremely rare - they were hereditary, but only in eight or so bloodlines in the entire Elsphere.
Uka landed with far less grace, then followed Vesper as they headed towards the interior drawbridge. Vesper hadn’t actually had a chance to test out that defense mechanism yet; he had a drawbridge on either side of the portcullis, so attackers couldn’t just waltz right in.
They found the elf there, as Nate had said. He was being carefully minded by several soldiers in Vesper’s black and silver, but didn’t seem to be showing any signs of wanting to go anywhere. True to Nate's word, the elf stood next to a black horse and was dressed in black from his black hood to the toes of his black boots. He didn’t appear to be armed, though that cloak could have held any number of small weapons.
Vesper was a tall man, and he towered over the elf, who seemed to be substantially below the average elven height. Actually, he looked about as tall as Tori, Vesper's adoptive sister, who was only five foot three. To his credit, though, the messenger didn’t seem intimidated. He just reached up and lowered his hood, revealing his face.
He was definitely a full-blooded elf with that silver-grey skin, complete with a faint metallic sheen, and those pointed ears. His face was angular, his left eye bright blue, and his hair golden-blond. He might have been in his early twenties, but his right eye was milky white and obviously blind. The overall impression was distinctly unnatural.
"Vesper," the elf said. He had a soft voice with a middling pitch, and - Vesper noticed with a shiver - as he spoke, a faint, whispering echo could be heard. "My name is Toros Everiel. I bring a message from Xidar, Lord of Telluris. Will you hear it?"
Vesper frowned. He’d never heard of a 'Lord of Telluris', much less one named Xidar. Last he’d checked, the planet's rightful owner hadn’t been seen in millennia. But he simply said, "Yeah, go on."
Toros looked him directly in the eye and spoke a single word. "Daran."
Vesper barely had time to prevent a look of surprise from manifesting on his face. That name wasn’t used on this planet, so as strange as it was to hear it spoken, it wouldn’t do to show that he recognized it. "Pardon?" he said lightly.
Toros' one eye scanned the area, lingering on several faces. Then he turned and began to walk away.
"Hey, wait!" Uka called. "What about the message?"
"That was the message," Toros said as he swung, with a surprisingly high jump, into the saddle of his horse. "Farewell, Lord Vesper." He wheeled his horse around and rode away before another word could be spoken.
Vesper watched him go, deep in thought. He’d been blessed - or cursed, he had yet to decide - with a keen mind, and was already forming a theory. That had been either a test or a threat, and if the former, Vesper suspected that he, personally, had passed. Unfortunately, not all people were as skilled in the art of deception as he was.
Vesper tapped Uka's arm and led him out of earshot of the men on the bridge.
"What was the point of that?" Uka whispered once they stopped. "Seems like a waste of a messenger, if you ask me."
"That wasn’t just any messenger," Vesper replied grimly. "I know a killer when I see one. That boy is an assassin if I’ve ever seen one."
Uka didn’t question his father's assertion; he knew that Vesper had been an assassin himself, once, and obviously trusted his judgement. As well he should. There had been a cold, piercing quality to Toros' stare, like steel. Like Vesper's own eyes.
"And what about Daran?" Uka asked. "I thought they didn’t even know who that is on this planet."
"They don’t," Vesper agreed. There was a pantheon of six ‘gods’ on Telluris, each of which represented one of the Thousand aspects of Daranatanorax, but Daran himself was unknown. "He has a constellation and, kind of, a religion, but no Tellurian knows the name Daran. That has huge implications."
"He heard it from a World-Walker,” Uka guessed.
Vesper nodded. "That’s the least worrying possibility. Listen, I need you to look into this. Find out what you can about this 'Xidar', see if he’s contacted anyone else. But be subtle; we don’t want him to know we’re worried." Whatever the guy was up to, it was best not to appear weak.
Uka gave a lazy salute. "Righto, boss. And, uh… not to rub it in, but what was that I said about the veil parting?"
Vesper sighed. "You know, kid, the thing about predictions is that someday you’re always going to be right. Doesn’t mean you’re a precog."
Uka shrugged. "I’ll take what I can get. Right now, that’s bragging rights."

